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Aktion Dokomi 2012 by Carreauline Aktion Dokomi 2012 by Carreauline
As today my group told me "oh well, we're going to have an auction on the Dokomi" I was in full panic: I didn't even start xD

So this is my part in the auction!

It's supposed to be a broken mirror, though I think that it's not that visible... Character is my OC Yuzo

It's been a long time since I last drew with traditional media, so please be gentle ^^;
I always have the problem of the skin getting too light, even though in the beginning it seems too dark... have to work on this.


Kommt doch an unserem ArTogether-Stand vorbei, wenn ihr auf der Dokomi seid! :3
Ich würde mich freuen ^^ b
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bluevelvetwings Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is pretty! There's only one issue I have, and that's with the light reflected in the eyes... for some reason it looks really out of place. like maybe it should be a little more transparent? Or smoothed out or something? Other than that, I think this is really amazing!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I guess I know what you mean ^^
I realized I scanned it before adding the highlights with white acrylic paint, so I retouched this with Photoshop. That's why it looks so "sharp" I guess.

Thank you so much for your comment~
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bluevelvetwings Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, okay! I think it looks great other than that, and I can see how you'd do that. I've done stuff like that before T.T
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much~~ I'm glad you like it, this really pushes me to draw on!
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Caim-The-Order Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow amazing the details are soo awesome O 3 O!! and the hair XOO its amazing!!!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much~
I'm glad you like it! ^o^/
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Caim-The-Order Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
O 3 O no problem ∩(︶▽︶)∩!
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Anime-Maniac4121 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I can't exactly tell if you got critiqued or not yet... I don't speak german XD
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have been a little, but nevertheless feel free to tell me your opinion, if you like to xD
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Anime-Maniac4121 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ok then.
*ahem* I'm from MA-I and I'll be critiquing you today.

This is honestly a very good piece. I only have a few thing to point out and everything else is perfect! I absolutly love the was you colored it and make such an even tone with colored pencils and the color choices were very good.

The only things I have to point out is the collarbone and the nose. The collarbone from the angle I'm seeing suggested is a little farther down her chest and the nostrils aren't quite... vertical at such an angle. More horizontal than anything.

And if you wanted to give the impression of a broken mirror then maybe adding more shards around the main piece.

Very good work. Keep it up!
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