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Aktion Dokomi 2012 by Carreauline Aktion Dokomi 2012 by Carreauline
As today my group told me "oh well, we're going to have an auction on the Dokomi" I was in full panic: I didn't even start xD

So this is my part in the auction!

It's supposed to be a broken mirror, though I think that it's not that visible... Character is my OC Yuzo

It's been a long time since I last drew with traditional media, so please be gentle ^^;
I always have the problem of the skin getting too light, even though in the beginning it seems too dark... have to work on this.


Kommt doch an unserem ArTogether-Stand vorbei, wenn ihr auf der Dokomi seid! :3
Ich würde mich freuen ^^ b
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bluevelvetwings Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is pretty! There's only one issue I have, and that's with the light reflected in the eyes... for some reason it looks really out of place. like maybe it should be a little more transparent? Or smoothed out or something? Other than that, I think this is really amazing!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I guess I know what you mean ^^
I realized I scanned it before adding the highlights with white acrylic paint, so I retouched this with Photoshop. That's why it looks so "sharp" I guess.

Thank you so much for your comment~
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bluevelvetwings Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, okay! I think it looks great other than that, and I can see how you'd do that. I've done stuff like that before T.T
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much~~ I'm glad you like it, this really pushes me to draw on!
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Caim-The-Order Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow amazing the details are soo awesome O 3 O!! and the hair XOO its amazing!!!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much~
I'm glad you like it! ^o^/
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Caim-The-Order Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
O 3 O no problem ∩(︶▽︶)∩!
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Anime-Maniac4121 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I can't exactly tell if you got critiqued or not yet... I don't speak german XD
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have been a little, but nevertheless feel free to tell me your opinion, if you like to xD
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Anime-Maniac4121 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ok then.
*ahem* I'm from MA-I and I'll be critiquing you today.

This is honestly a very good piece. I only have a few thing to point out and everything else is perfect! I absolutly love the was you colored it and make such an even tone with colored pencils and the color choices were very good.

The only things I have to point out is the collarbone and the nose. The collarbone from the angle I'm seeing suggested is a little farther down her chest and the nostrils aren't quite... vertical at such an angle. More horizontal than anything.

And if you wanted to give the impression of a broken mirror then maybe adding more shards around the main piece.

Very good work. Keep it up!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!!
I'll try to keep your advice in mind for my next one!
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Anime-Maniac4121 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome! I hope to see your next work. :)
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dead-robot Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah okay, schick. Wobei du hier den Mut haben solltest das Gesicht auf mehrere Splitter des Spiegels zu verteilen. :)
Das macht das Bild interessanter. Ist aber schwierig das Gesicht so zu splitten, dass es cool aussieht. XD Der Schlüsselbein ist an beiden Seiten zu lang. Zumindest wenn ich so meinen Körper so anguck.. XD
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Carreauline Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Jaa, das war auch eine sehr hastige Aktion x'D
"Mal eben so" ein Bild für morgen herzuzaubern ist ein bisschen schwer ^^; Dafür ist es ganz okay denke ich.
Aber sowas will ich unbedingt auch mal ausprobieren *__* EIgentlich mag ich sehr viel ausprobieren, aber immer wenn ich es tue, dann geht es in die Hose x'D

Jaah, die leidige Anatomie... ich gebe mir Mühe zu lernen! x3
Danke für deine Tipps!
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ningunrecords Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice work
marvelous looking eyes
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Carreauline Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot!
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LittleTasu Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woww, es sieht toll aus *_*
Würde es gerne echt sehen, vielleicht schaff ichs ja mal vorbeizuschaun xD
Die Haare gefallen mir total gut und auch der Ausdruck insgesamt!
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Carreauline Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Das wär total cool~~

Vielen Dank!
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